Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/23/17, 7:41 AM
Very hot. You could have been far better in terms of writing. Hope the story is getting hotter!!
Anonymous
8/23/17, 6:40 AM
Let bieber win in the end and be master of all
Anonymous
8/23/17, 6:03 AM
If you enjoy writing, then keep at it. You will only get better. Don't listen to that arsehole that says you shouldn't bother.
8/23/17, 5:44 AM
Still hot. And I still want more :)
Dec 20, 2008
Anonymous
8/23/17, 5:10 AM
Holy shit, hands down the best story I have ever read!
Anonymous
8/23/17, 4:43 AM
Really liked it!
Reverse Critic
8/23/17, 3:15 AM
Lad, write all you want and all you can. If you listen (selectively) to the feedback you'll improve. It's a fantasy I'm sure others share. True that editing and punctuation would make it more readable but stick with it. And to the cynic who called you "Son"... bug off.
KnightRider
8/23/17, 2:22 AM
Turning a bunch of frat bros into thuggish leather bikers would be so damn hot.
Anonymous
8/23/17, 2:10 AM
I agree!!
Anonymous
8/23/17, 2:08 AM
Son If you don't how to write, don't bother. The grammar sucks. It's awful, practically unreadable.