Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/21/17, 4:29 AM
Damn that was hot
Anonymous
8/21/17, 4:18 AM
I'm disappointed...This could have been super hot if there weren't so many grammar problems. Putting them in paragraphs helps make it easier to read as well. As it is now, even as my biggest kink...I wasn't turned on at all :/. Pretty good for a first story though.
AeonFlux
8/21/17, 3:24 AM
I do agree with the idea of proofreading........ I'm german so reading was quite difficult........ but nice start
Anonymous
8/21/17, 2:21 AM
This was incredible. Thank you!!
Anonymous
8/21/17, 2:19 AM
Writing a story is the first part of what your doing. The ides are on the right track. Editing for spelling, punctuation and grammar makes the story readable. If you don't spend the time, don't bother.
Anonymous
8/21/17, 12:10 AM
super story.......
Aug 19, 2017
Tsuba
8/21/17, 12:06 AM
Great job as always! I love reading Talon's claws when it first came out, and it is great to see that you keep the spirit of it! Keep on writing!
oinkoink
8/20/17, 10:24 PM
Horny read. Thanks. Love stories about man smells.
8/20/17, 8:24 PM
thanks
Aug 19, 2017
AeonFlux
8/20/17, 7:19 PM
Please......... write it........and tell us what the stain can do to you 😁