Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/21/17, 12:10 AM
super story.......
Aug 19, 2017
Tsuba
8/21/17, 12:06 AM
Great job as always! I love reading Talon's claws when it first came out, and it is great to see that you keep the spirit of it! Keep on writing!
oinkoink
8/20/17, 10:24 PM
Horny read. Thanks. Love stories about man smells.
8/20/17, 8:24 PM
thanks
Aug 19, 2017
AeonFlux
8/20/17, 7:19 PM
Please......... write it........and tell us what the stain can do to you 😁
Anonymous
8/20/17, 6:55 PM
Very hot ! Made me cum so hard. Please have a chapter that focuses more on families and dads getting humiliated and dominated. Thanks !!
BankStreet
8/20/17, 6:49 PM
I'd be very pleased to provide an editorial review of your next submission. No charge. Thirty+ years experience as a professional editor. Two degrees in English. hbs46@yahoo.com
Aug 19, 2017
LongtimeFan
8/20/17, 6:43 PM
Another fantastic story! I don't know what it is, Hypnothrill, but you REALLY know how to write dialogue indicating altered states (distant, robotic talk in this one, "meathead"/dumber talk in series like Meatz and Musclehead, and generally just awesome phrasing). Reading the altered words and thought processes always gets me going. Keep it up!
8/20/17, 6:39 PM
Please do continue this.
Anonymous
8/20/17, 6:34 PM
This was hot! Would love to see a continuation.