Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/21/17, 2:19 AM
Writing a story is the first part of what your doing. The ides are on the right track. Editing for spelling, punctuation and grammar makes the story readable. If you don't spend the time, don't bother.
Anonymous
8/21/17, 12:10 AM
super story.......
Aug 19, 2017
Tsuba
8/21/17, 12:06 AM
Great job as always! I love reading Talon's claws when it first came out, and it is great to see that you keep the spirit of it! Keep on writing!
oinkoink
8/20/17, 10:24 PM
Horny read. Thanks. Love stories about man smells.
8/20/17, 8:24 PM
thanks
Aug 19, 2017
AeonFlux
8/20/17, 7:19 PM
Please......... write it........and tell us what the stain can do to you 😁
Anonymous
8/20/17, 6:55 PM
Very hot ! Made me cum so hard. Please have a chapter that focuses more on families and dads getting humiliated and dominated. Thanks !!
BankStreet
8/20/17, 6:49 PM
I'd be very pleased to provide an editorial review of your next submission. No charge. Thirty+ years experience as a professional editor. Two degrees in English. hbs46@yahoo.com
Aug 19, 2017
LongtimeFan
8/20/17, 6:43 PM
Another fantastic story! I don't know what it is, Hypnothrill, but you REALLY know how to write dialogue indicating altered states (distant, robotic talk in this one, "meathead"/dumber talk in series like Meatz and Musclehead, and generally just awesome phrasing). Reading the altered words and thought processes always gets me going. Keep it up!
8/20/17, 6:39 PM
Please do continue this.