Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/20/17, 4:14 PM
OMG. The family scenes are so hot. If only there were more. Can't wait for the richer and manly families
8/20/17, 3:45 PM
OK thanks for the advice i will try harder
Anonymous
8/20/17, 3:16 PM
Sorry, but I could not read this. Please learn to use punctuation, capital letters where appropriate, and paragraphs.
Anonymous
8/20/17, 3:06 PM
Paragraphs, punctuation and CAPITAL LETTERS when needed. The above may make it readable...
tfmrph33@yahoo.com
8/20/17, 3:00 PM
Great transformation and premise. Loved the mental part!
Anonymous
8/20/17, 2:40 PM
Great story!
Anonymous
8/20/17, 2:39 PM
paragraghs!!
Anonymous
8/20/17, 12:16 PM
Torn, I don't want master ginger to win... but Bieber-pup is just the best thing ever!!!
nyjogger4e@aol.com
8/20/17, 11:49 AM
I'm surprised there aren't any comments here. Fantastic story!
Oct 5, 2006
nyjogger4e@aol.com
8/20/17, 11:46 AM
The this is a great follow up story to the taking of Bra-lan!