Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/20/17, 4:54 PM
An interesting idea, but the poor presentation REALLY ruins things. I totally get that desire to write things out quickly whilst the idea's in your head, but you owe it to yourself to then do the proof reading and fine tuning afterwards. If that's not your strong suit, ask a friend. The results will totally be worth the extra effort ;)
Anonymous
8/20/17, 4:14 PM
OMG. The family scenes are so hot. If only there were more. Can't wait for the richer and manly families
8/20/17, 3:45 PM
OK thanks for the advice i will try harder
Anonymous
8/20/17, 3:16 PM
Sorry, but I could not read this. Please learn to use punctuation, capital letters where appropriate, and paragraphs.
Anonymous
8/20/17, 3:06 PM
Paragraphs, punctuation and CAPITAL LETTERS when needed. The above may make it readable...
tfmrph33@yahoo.com
8/20/17, 3:00 PM
Great transformation and premise. Loved the mental part!
Anonymous
8/20/17, 2:40 PM
Great story!
Anonymous
8/20/17, 2:39 PM
paragraghs!!
Anonymous
8/20/17, 12:16 PM
Torn, I don't want master ginger to win... but Bieber-pup is just the best thing ever!!!
nyjogger4e@aol.com
8/20/17, 11:49 AM
I'm surprised there aren't any comments here. Fantastic story!