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Aug 19, 2017
LongtimeFan
8/20/17, 6:43 PM
Another fantastic story! I don't know what it is, Hypnothrill, but you REALLY know how to write dialogue indicating altered states (distant, robotic talk in this one, "meathead"/dumber talk in series like Meatz and Musclehead, and generally just awesome phrasing). Reading the altered words and thought processes always gets me going. Keep it up!
8/20/17, 6:39 PM
Please do continue this.
Anonymous
8/20/17, 6:34 PM
This was hot! Would love to see a continuation.
8/20/17, 5:25 PM
I am the author
8/20/17, 5:17 PM
...or ask the author to post their email so you can help. ...or post your email, or a link to your tumblr or other social media, so the author can contact you for help with proof-reading.
gaymindsthinkalike
8/20/17, 5:16 PM
thanks for pointing it out
8/20/17, 5:14 PM
Constructive criticism is great and all guys, but: a) straight up negative criticism doesn't usually help b) it's tough for new writers in this genre to ask friends to edit... because most people don't tell their real life friends that they write gay mind control stories. If you're going to criticize someone's writing and tell them to get it proof-read, man up and email them offering to do the proof-reading.
Anonymous
8/20/17, 4:55 PM
PS. The proof reading also works for usernames. I'm guessing that's meant to be gayminds not gaymids?
Anonymous
8/20/17, 4:54 PM
An interesting idea, but the poor presentation REALLY ruins things. I totally get that desire to write things out quickly whilst the idea's in your head, but you owe it to yourself to then do the proof reading and fine tuning afterwards. If that's not your strong suit, ask a friend. The results will totally be worth the extra effort ;)
Anonymous
8/20/17, 4:14 PM
OMG. The family scenes are so hot. If only there were more. Can't wait for the richer and manly families