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relaxdreamfollow
8/18/17, 9:58 PM
Thanks for the encouragement. Monday's misadventure coming soon
8/18/17, 5:56 PM
Anon1, That's a valid point. I had more planned for the days, but once I was over 32k words I decided to shelve those plans for a future project with this story. Anon2, It depends on the methods being used. In this case, he is being hypnotized with the help of a chemical aid. These ideas would not naturally occur to him. He is being consciously distracted by the physical actions, made receptive by the chemicals, and his subconscious is being fed the changes step by step.
Cliff
8/18/17, 2:59 PM
Thanks for finishing this tale, I always like a somewhat "happy" ending. Nanites is one of my favorite genre, it's have a lot of potential for all kinds of changes. Hope you will write more or continue this series!
Anonymous
8/18/17, 2:01 PM
Does every transformation have to be spelled out? Is there no imagination left? Slow transform stories need a first set up and then let the mind take over.
jakeyd
8/18/17, 11:31 AM
mmm, fantastic, love to read about Jason falling under Cole's command, and enjoying the pleasure of submitting to him so much
Anonymous
8/18/17, 3:56 AM
Very different from your usual stuff. I liked it!
tomozco
8/17/17, 11:33 PM
Very interesting and promising start! Looking forward for more!
Anonymous
8/17/17, 10:11 PM
Sort of a more romantic version of 'Just Do It!' P.s. Would live to see a 3rd chapter for just do it! .
Anonymous
8/17/17, 8:52 PM
wow! great!
Anonymous
8/17/17, 8:09 PM
My hard on tells me that we need another chapter of this story! Hot!