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Anonymous
8/13/17, 2:53 PM
Hot! more please! Were there any pictures that inspired you to this story? ;-)
Anonymous
8/13/17, 2:39 PM
Like others still steel hard after reading this please continue Would be hot to see Steve's transformation from Marks point of view
Anonymous
8/13/17, 2:38 PM
Hot!
Anonymous
8/13/17, 2:18 PM
What a happy ending lol I agree that this was the end would be nice for more
8/13/17, 1:38 PM
I think Davey becoming a muscle bear daddy would be uber hot! I hope the Malltarts grow and shrink many guys at the bar! Whatever happens please continue this!
Anonymous
8/13/17, 8:38 AM
Please continue
Anonymous
8/13/17, 8:05 AM
i really love this. hope there was a continuation
8/13/17, 7:08 AM
Yes please. I can't wait for Bolshoi Papa to come to the US.
8/13/17, 7:07 AM
Beautiful.
Ragnarok
8/13/17, 6:47 AM
I think this series is in go hands my friend. As far as a switch, Cris you go ahead and do whatever you want. I personally though, I planned to make Davey a Dominant Emo boyfriend for Jackie. He would have been slightly like a Malltart but more manly and a top. I also was going to give him leathers like you did and a harness and make Jackie and him in an open relationship and have the mall tarts encourage and twist him into all kinds of kinky fun at the club. Which was why I brought Kwan into the story and had him put small touches in Jackie's tattoo like cuffs, a flogger and then I mentioned Kwan wanting to fist him. It was all leading up to the night of kinky dirty raunchy fun at the Manhole. Where the Malltarts would find men and make Dominant Daddies out of them and Jackie would grow more and more submissive. Initially in my idea they would have tried to change Davey to a Malltart like them and Jackie stops them and makes him a Dominant boyfriend for him. Like something between the two sides of the changes. I wanted Jackie to find happiness in the end but still but a cock/ cum hungry slut for the rest of his life. Though all these were just ideas and ways I could have lead the story. I am eager to see what your ideas are for the next chapters. Feel free to message me though if you wanted to collaborate or just bounce ideas. Either way please continue this however you see fit, big fan of what you already have done. :) ckragnarok@hotmail.com