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8/13/17, 7:07 AM
Beautiful.
Ragnarok
8/13/17, 6:47 AM
I think this series is in go hands my friend. As far as a switch, Cris you go ahead and do whatever you want. I personally though, I planned to make Davey a Dominant Emo boyfriend for Jackie. He would have been slightly like a Malltart but more manly and a top. I also was going to give him leathers like you did and a harness and make Jackie and him in an open relationship and have the mall tarts encourage and twist him into all kinds of kinky fun at the club. Which was why I brought Kwan into the story and had him put small touches in Jackie's tattoo like cuffs, a flogger and then I mentioned Kwan wanting to fist him. It was all leading up to the night of kinky dirty raunchy fun at the Manhole. Where the Malltarts would find men and make Dominant Daddies out of them and Jackie would grow more and more submissive. Initially in my idea they would have tried to change Davey to a Malltart like them and Jackie stops them and makes him a Dominant boyfriend for him. Like something between the two sides of the changes. I wanted Jackie to find happiness in the end but still but a cock/ cum hungry slut for the rest of his life. Though all these were just ideas and ways I could have lead the story. I am eager to see what your ideas are for the next chapters. Feel free to message me though if you wanted to collaborate or just bounce ideas. Either way please continue this however you see fit, big fan of what you already have done. :) ckragnarok@hotmail.com
himboso
8/13/17, 5:39 AM
Too big a switch? Will the tart-bois go out and meet/make some daddy bears now? (that would be a pretty welcome switch as far as I am concerned, at least)
Anonymous
8/13/17, 4:47 AM
Awesome!!
Anonymous
8/13/17, 2:19 AM
I'm still hard. That was great. I wanted to read more. Great story, as usual!!!
8/13/17, 1:35 AM
Yeah, Ragnarok, I tried to keep track of the prior chapters and not make any continuity errors. I've enjoyed "Frat House" and "Fashion Forward" too. Now I'm thinking my next chapter might be too big a switch on what people are expecting from the series, so perhaps, in the spirit of the Wiki, someone else should take the reins for the next chapter.
Anonymous
8/13/17, 1:27 AM
It seems like it's gonna go kind of the way of Swish Infection. like they're gonna head to a random bar, and end up making it just faaaaaaabulous~
JasCo
8/12/17, 11:24 PM
Wow I was not expecting this kind of response. I was not sure about continuing this but perhaps I could if I can think of the best way to take it.
Anonymous
8/12/17, 11:02 PM
This is good.
Ragnarok
8/12/17, 10:58 PM
Wow I am very impressed. You made your writing of this chapter fall almost seamlessly into the other ones. Great job. I personally did a lot of the writing of this series in the original Wiki and am very happy to see it finally continued. In fact, if you or anyone else are ever interested in continuing the Twinks In Frat House series, I have several pages written up already and would be more than happy to collaborate so that the third chapter could finally be finished. See. back in 2014 I wrote a lot of Fashion Forward as well as these other two series and couple one offs here and there on the Wiki. I had always hoped the Wiki would come back when the new site opened but that never seemed to be the case. Thanks for at least continuing the spirit and story of this slutty tale. Love to see where you have it heading. ;)