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9/14/24, 1:20 AM
In a surprising development, combat training was not expected, and this gave the story a big twist. The recruits' bodies and minds have reached the first-stafe standards. After entering the second stage, may the true purpose of the program gradually be revealed? But I suddenly have a few questions: 1. All of the men looked identical. But theoretically, height cannot be achieved through exercise. Is there any way to make them consistent? 2. Most recruits might have no combat experience before joining the program. Why does Scott lose every time? Is it because he is unlucky to meet a recruit with combat experience? Or is this training actually distinguishing certain aptitudes, such as Alpha types and Beta types? 3. The protagonist's name remains Scott instead of changing to the recruit's number X-88. Does it imply that his minds have not been completely reprogrammed and he is still attached to things outside of the program? Does the program want them to keep these? 4. After they took off the Cum Cap, did they just throw it away and let the cum spill on the floor? This is a strange question but I really want to know 😅

9/14/24, 8:07 PM
@[Tofu83](/user/show/87624) Absolutely some great questions. Both BlackMaple and you are really getting to the nitty-gritty of this story. But some of your questions can't be answered now, because I'm afraid it can spoil the ending. So ask me again once Chapter 9 is posted. But let me see if I can answer some. 1. Well this is just poor writing on my part. I honestly give little thought to character's appearances in the story. It's usually been my writing style to keep character's physically vague. That way, as the reader, you fill in the blanks and your brain creates the descriptions. The reason for that is, when this is done, the reader often projects themselves into the story. And then you become more involved ... more invested ... and ultimately more turned on. The only time I usually include descriptions in when it's story-driven. In this case, I had to have Scott overweight for him to be involved with the Program. But I never really focused on height. 2. This question cannot be answered at this time. It would involve spoiling the story. 3. This question cannot be answered at this time. It would involve spoiling the story. 4. Well ... I probably should've described this a bit better. You know when you go to the gym, there's usually cubbies for shoes or other personal belongings. Well, I imagined something similar here. I just forgot to write it. There's probably some kind of hook on the wall for all the men to hang up their cum caps. And once they do ... yes ... their cocks continue to leak. Imagine twenty, thirty, fifty guys all in a weight room ... all leaking from their cocks. As they get physical, hands all over each other, their bodies rolling over the floor ... yeah! ... they're smearing themselves in each others' cum. Think of it sorta like mud-wrestling ... should we just call it cum-wrestling? But yeah ... that's what it would look like visually. Pretty hot if you ask me.

9/15/24, 2:35 AM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) Thank you for answering! Really, I easily projected myself into your stories all the time. It’s not poor writing, it’s your style :) When feeling what all men are feeling at, it becomes no each other but one hive, the concept of the individual has been eliminated. This concept seems to come up a lot in your other stories, and I think it’s one of the reasons why I like your works. I forgot they continued leaking even in combat match! Men wrestling in CUM!! I’m leaking now, can imagine the scene and feeling. It's like I'm also in the program, only the system forget about me, and my desire to connect to Zone became even stronger. This also reminds me of a scene that a classmate told me before in his imagination: men were swimming in a swimming pool made up of cum from many men. All the liquid in their bodies turned into cum, and they became equal when they came out of the pool.
9/13/24, 8:10 PM
Love you are doing more stories! Wonder if you might include any thongs, pup play, or daddy kink in later chapters? Excited to see what comes next 😁

9/13/24, 8:19 PM
@[Botbot](/user/show/10010276) Sorry no daddy will appear.

9/13/24, 8:24 PM
@[Kyle Cicero](/user/show/10023983) No biggie, still excited to see how this one goes :)

Mark
9/15/24, 2:33 AM
@[Botbot](/user/show/10010276) So that's a maybe on the thongs;)
9/15/24, 12:45 AM
So very hot
9/15/24, 12:37 AM
This was super hot! I really like the POV. And I really like dom top son and subby bottom dad. I'm more into what playtime the son can have with the dad at home rather than the sharing idea. Maybe he tells his dad he needs to learn to cook, it's the job of a boy to cook for his dom. Hehe But really I'd be interested in the son rimming and then fucking and filling his dad. Blissing him out!
Anonymous
9/14/24, 11:19 PM
i'd also love to see this chapter from the slave's pov!
Aug 30, 2023
9/14/24, 9:38 PM
Don’t know if I read this before but saw it now after clicking to see if you’d written anything besides Dan’s Words of Truth. Hot story. I like the premise and especially liked the main character being oblivious to how he was affecting himself. Hot changes/story!
Anonymous
9/14/24, 8:10 PM
Awesome Story. U are by far my favourite author and even though I rarely comment please know that people love to read ur stories!

9/14/24, 8:54 PM
@Anonymous Thanks so much, I really appreciate it! Comments are the only payment I get, so please don't be a stranger!
9/14/24, 8:48 PM
Great start! Can’t wait to read more!
Leather Muir Cap
9/14/24, 8:46 PM
It always makes me so happy to see a new chapter has been added. I love to get into full BLUF and read what's going to happen next. Sexy as fuck man, keep it coming!! My favorite stuff is when a young man yearns to be a leatherman and then he goes through a transformation. I love hearing how he feels getting leathered for the first time and seeing what he's become in a mirror. Loooooove all the stories you write! Thanks for posting!
Anonymous
9/14/24, 7:39 PM
Please please please! Update this story