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Anonymous
8/6/17, 3:56 PM
Please continue this series
Anonymous
8/6/17, 3:53 PM
Can't wait for part 2
Anonymous
8/6/17, 3:34 PM
lol this is his story, he can discribe sex however way he likes. Your comment comes off as very condescending
Anonymous
8/6/17, 1:35 PM
well that series left me empty... in the very good way... :)
Anonymous
8/6/17, 1:13 PM
FUCKING AMAZING story!!
Anonymous
8/6/17, 11:33 AM
There is nothing wrong with my 'reading comprehension' thank you very much. None of my straight friends use such a term as 'bum sex'. It's just 'sex' or 'fuck'. And yes I do write stories - on this and other boards.
Apr 23, 2014
AeonFlux
8/6/17, 8:11 AM
Great ........
GrowingGeek
8/6/17, 8:00 AM
Loved it, can't wait to see what's next!
8/6/17, 5:41 AM
Those are perceptive observations, Jeux, but I've got to say that I don't really mind the story being a mixed bag. Sure, some sections might do nothing for me, but each installment has at least a few paragraphs that turn me on. If Webb025 were trying to publish this as a book, then he might need to worry about keeping focus and only targeting a specific kind of reader. But he's writing an online serial and getting (contradictory) reader feedback with each installment. So to me the soap opera style seems perfectly suited to the medium.
Jeux
8/6/17, 4:47 AM
The story is starting to feel like a soap to me, I guess that's why people start to lose interests. You went from one story line to three, five pairs of master-slave to countless pairs, plus family members. It's too many characters for a scene-focusing erotica. In the beginning, the story is about freshman nerds mind control older jocks. People attracted to that topic might not be attracted to teacher enslaving students. If the story started as plot-focusing it might work.