Recent Comments

8/5/17, 6:20 PM
Yes, I know perfectly well that "bumsex" is a childish, demeaning term used by straight men who are uncomfortable at the thought of male intercourse. That's basically the whole reason I used it--to demonstrate how the brainwashed straight characters are now enthusiastically participating in the very practice they would have once found dirty. You see, I am writing stories for ADULTS--I'm just writing for ADULTS who have high levels of reading comprehension.
Anonymous
8/5/17, 6:01 PM
First two chapters were good but this was just weak! And as for 'bumsex' just use the right word for it. you're writing stories for ADULTS not sniggering teenagers
Blueron
8/5/17, 5:39 PM
Very HOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT! Please continue.
YoungSHITPIGbrad
8/5/17, 5:26 PM
Fuuucckkk!! Wish I was the young shit faced apeman!!
Anonymous
8/5/17, 5:24 PM
continue please, I suggest furry transformation
Cigarboycody
8/5/17, 5:18 PM
Fucking HOT story SIR!! Want more!! No NEED more!! Need to see the son converted into a big dicked fat Maduro smoking redneck . Wish my CIGAR MASTER would change me like that. He did change me. From a goody-goody straight non-smoking jock,to HIS gear wearing, fat Maduro smoking, cock hungry sleazy smokepig
webb025
8/5/17, 5:17 PM
Oh all right, I guess people are reading the story after all. After the last section drew a grand total of 4 comments -- 2 partly negative -- I thought it was dying on the vine. Interestingly enough, between comments and email, Bieber and Ginger fans seem evenly divided. I still have no idea who's going to win, but I'm sure both will have ups and downs in the coming section...
Chase Darksyde
8/5/17, 4:33 PM
The story is well written but doesn't hit my senses as much as Valhalla-14 did. Would love to have more like those from you
8/5/17, 3:28 PM
I'm continuing to really enjoy this, especially Ginger's devious plan, but I agree that I want him to lose I the end,
Anonymous
8/5/17, 1:48 PM
I really like beiber losing himself to dog thoughts. I want more woof