Recent Comments

8/5/17, 3:28 PM
I'm continuing to really enjoy this, especially Ginger's devious plan, but I agree that I want him to lose I the end,
Anonymous
8/5/17, 1:48 PM
I really like beiber losing himself to dog thoughts. I want more woof
Anonymous
8/5/17, 12:41 PM
Also beautiful Story,as always
Anonymous
8/5/17, 12:11 PM
More. Simply more. Please more
Jason
8/5/17, 12:10 PM
Love this series!
Pornopiggy
8/5/17, 10:05 AM
Daaaayuuuumm. So good I'm gonna read it again and blow my wad. Wish I lived in this world, or in chikara's head, this was fantastic. Love the raunch and stink, please don't stop with that. Thank you for the horny read man!!!
8/5/17, 9:20 AM
Wow, this is great! I love seeing how the whole neighborhood is devolving. Keep it coming!
Anonymous
8/5/17, 7:11 AM
Please don't let this story end! I am enjoying it so much!
Anonymous
8/5/17, 6:34 AM
I like that the son dominates the dad, and the small penis story line. It would be hot if there was a little less aggression, and maybe more mental mind fucking of the dad and more SPH. But that's just my opinion. Nice story
Crim
8/5/17, 2:51 AM
Ignore blind admiration. This isn't good, barely just ok. You need to write more, try new things. Too much of this is just stated "this thing happened, then this" a lot of personality is missing in this. It not as though it's not worth continuing, but before your next chapter try putting the story into a text to speech engine to have it ready aloud back to you. Try incorperating details about appearance slowly over time, and don't try and describe people like you're giving a police description. Let people's imagination do the work, even small details like eye or hair color rarely matter unless you're going to reference it later or is a key detail (Ginger hair, unnatural eye color, black skin, etc.)