Recent Comments

Jason
8/5/17, 12:10 PM
Love this series!
Pornopiggy
8/5/17, 10:05 AM
Daaaayuuuumm. So good I'm gonna read it again and blow my wad. Wish I lived in this world, or in chikara's head, this was fantastic. Love the raunch and stink, please don't stop with that. Thank you for the horny read man!!!
8/5/17, 9:20 AM
Wow, this is great! I love seeing how the whole neighborhood is devolving. Keep it coming!
Anonymous
8/5/17, 7:11 AM
Please don't let this story end! I am enjoying it so much!
Anonymous
8/5/17, 6:34 AM
I like that the son dominates the dad, and the small penis story line. It would be hot if there was a little less aggression, and maybe more mental mind fucking of the dad and more SPH. But that's just my opinion. Nice story
Crim
8/5/17, 2:51 AM
Ignore blind admiration. This isn't good, barely just ok. You need to write more, try new things. Too much of this is just stated "this thing happened, then this" a lot of personality is missing in this. It not as though it's not worth continuing, but before your next chapter try putting the story into a text to speech engine to have it ready aloud back to you. Try incorperating details about appearance slowly over time, and don't try and describe people like you're giving a police description. Let people's imagination do the work, even small details like eye or hair color rarely matter unless you're going to reference it later or is a key detail (Ginger hair, unnatural eye color, black skin, etc.)
Cigarboycody
8/4/17, 11:50 PM
Great start!! Please add more chapters with more cigars,more sex,and more cigarsex!!
8/4/17, 11:02 PM
I'm in favor of a Ginger downfall as well, getting some reversal on him by Bieber's friend after he gets a call or something to learn his brother's being used like a toy anyways despite the promise so he turns on Ginger and makes him the dog for Bieber or something like that. Ginger ain't one I like with his jealous nature.
marc frank
8/4/17, 10:21 PM
need to continue story..have father in last attempt..manage to give son a massive shot of roids in something...like a shake...etc...when son not.... thinking. .have them both addicted...and growing huge..unable to stop
tomozco
8/4/17, 10:19 PM
Enjoyed it so far, and looks like the storyline is coming together now. So I'm looking forward for more, keep it up! ;)