Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/5/17, 7:11 AM
Please don't let this story end! I am enjoying it so much!
Anonymous
8/5/17, 6:34 AM
I like that the son dominates the dad, and the small penis story line. It would be hot if there was a little less aggression, and maybe more mental mind fucking of the dad and more SPH. But that's just my opinion. Nice story
Crim
8/5/17, 2:51 AM
Ignore blind admiration. This isn't good, barely just ok. You need to write more, try new things. Too much of this is just stated "this thing happened, then this" a lot of personality is missing in this. It not as though it's not worth continuing, but before your next chapter try putting the story into a text to speech engine to have it ready aloud back to you. Try incorperating details about appearance slowly over time, and don't try and describe people like you're giving a police description. Let people's imagination do the work, even small details like eye or hair color rarely matter unless you're going to reference it later or is a key detail (Ginger hair, unnatural eye color, black skin, etc.)
Cigarboycody
8/4/17, 11:50 PM
Great start!! Please add more chapters with more cigars,more sex,and more cigarsex!!
8/4/17, 11:02 PM
I'm in favor of a Ginger downfall as well, getting some reversal on him by Bieber's friend after he gets a call or something to learn his brother's being used like a toy anyways despite the promise so he turns on Ginger and makes him the dog for Bieber or something like that. Ginger ain't one I like with his jealous nature.
marc frank
8/4/17, 10:21 PM
need to continue story..have father in last attempt..manage to give son a massive shot of roids in something...like a shake...etc...when son not.... thinking. .have them both addicted...and growing huge..unable to stop
tomozco
8/4/17, 10:19 PM
Enjoyed it so far, and looks like the storyline is coming together now. So I'm looking forward for more, keep it up! ;)
Cigarboycody
8/4/17, 9:55 PM
I concur. We need more chapters of this fuckn' hot story SIR!! Chapters that the CIGAR MASTER'S slaves bring HIM potential slaves to be made cigar slaves. Including their younger brothers and fathers. My CIGAR MASTER used hypnosis and HIS long, fat Maduro to make me and my jock buds HIS fat Maduro smoking sleazy nasty smokepigs I have brought my brothers and father to MASTER,and they now serve HIM as HIS loyal smokepigs
Anonymous
8/4/17, 9:17 PM
Just came across your story. Please continue.
Aug 4, 2017
xORRiNx
8/4/17, 7:00 PM
I don't think he's waking up in his old body that's for sure. 😉