Recent Comments

8/1/17, 4:44 AM
Great start! Keep going--I can't wait to see what happens with Clint and his housemates.
Anonymous
8/1/17, 3:24 AM
Love it! Self-contained short story that kept me going until I came right before the end; then a nice ending to tie it all together...really well-done!
Anonymous
8/1/17, 12:14 AM
I would love to see a part two and how Andy is dealing with his changes.
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
8/1/17, 12:01 AM
oh well, move on and stop being upset. Go read something else.
UchihaDEMS
7/31/17, 10:32 PM
YEEEEEEEEEEEEES I l-o-v-e-d it! I was so happy when I saw and update to this story. You see, this one was one of the first I read when I enter the mind-controlling-stories world, thanks for this <3
Anonymous
7/31/17, 10:29 PM
is Wishbone still around? Really hoping we get to see him finish this scorching story.
Anonymous
7/31/17, 9:57 PM
Great job! Thanks
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/31/17, 9:36 PM
You're creating a false equivalency between a very tiny minority of people who have health problems related to steroids and other hormones and a health epidemic. By 2050 30% of people will be obese. People who can't lose weight through diet and exercise should get bariatric surgery. It's not the grower part that's upsetting it's the acceptance part.
Anonymous
7/31/17, 9:28 PM
I thought that in this chaptet we'd see the home coming, but no.I'm waiting for the families to meet and get humiliated. Especially the daddies! Please keep going
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/31/17, 9:28 PM
Fucking hot and as a gainer exactly my cup of tea. For those that are saying about the health issues surrounding being obese there are also health issues surrounding being a gym bunny or muscle Mary.