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grim
9/13/24, 11:41 PM

Anonymous
9/13/24, 11:43 PM
@[grim](/user/show/2189701) Oh? Who else do you think this belongs to?

grim
9/14/24, 12:03 AM
@Anonymous I remember this post being made years ago by Mitch Corob or some name similar who had adapted a devianart story.

9/14/24, 12:05 AM
@[grim](/user/show/2189701) Oh! That’s why I asked - that’s me. I rebranded, took my stories down and have been releasing more frequently on my Patreon (I actually added a fifth milk-based chapter to this!). I also updated this story based on the deviantart author’s request.

grim
9/14/24, 12:07 AM
@[FatFantasies](/user/show/10054627) Then I’m glad to continue supporting you! I’m sorry for the accusation. It’s one of my all time favorite stories so I was not going to let it be stolen. I’ll remove my original comment

9/14/24, 12:13 AM
@[grim](/user/show/2189701) Def - and honestly I get it. The story on DA is so hot. That’s why I went through and while the beats are the same, this story is now more real from my perspective (vs my old one not the DA one).
9/13/24, 11:44 PM
Would love to see a chapter 2 to this. It has become one my favorite stories in the recent year (along with chapter 3 of @Edlam's The Wrong Roommate with Tanner and Matt). Both stories are getting frequent revisits by me for sure. Regardless if you never make a chapter 2, Great Job on this one. So hot.
9/13/24, 2:47 PM
I’m pleasantly surprised every time I see another part of this posted. To be honest, I generally find the choose your own adventure style of story telling very unsatisfying. Each part that sets up branching can be unsatisfying, and if I see a new part posted and expect some hot reality warping action, there often isn’t because the part is setting up a reader choice. As a result, I’m sort of tempted to wait until there are a couple of chapters before reading. The thing is, I love your writing, characters, ideas and execution so much that it’s difficult for me to wait lol. I loved this part. I love the change Oliver accidentally makes to his and Manuel’s history, I loved him remembering the new history. I love Manuel, and how you turned him from a geeky guy into a hot muscular confident hypnocock holder. It was another really hot chapter. And it had your trademark humor. “Cock” head was funny :) I am eager to see more of Remy fucking with Oliver, or even if it’s off panel but hinted, of Remy fucking Rider. And ultimately of someone using the chronivac selfishly. Oliver using it to turn Manuel into his live in service top, or to make the other people working at his firm into faithful tops ready to fuck him when he wants it, or give himself a hypno-ass. Or Manuel or Remy getting it again and using it to make Oliver and Rider into eager cock puppets. Remy having it and making Oliver more interested in Remy only and making his father jealous of Remy would be hot. That’s a bunch of random things I’m throwing out, but it’s mostly thinking of hot things that could be done. I’m really excited to see anything more you write with these characters and this set of scenarios. And I’m eager to read more :)

9/13/24, 11:26 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) Gotta give Nutiper credit for that particular joke :sweat_smile:! Glad you're enjoying it -- it was kind of an experimental fever dream I never intended to write. I have a couple chapters in drafts. Two branches with Remy fucking with Oliver will probably be next up.
Anonymous
9/13/24, 11:13 PM
So hot, you need to make a chapter two so we can find out what kinky shit happens to them wherever they get taken!
9/13/24, 9:05 PM
This story line checks all of my boxes. Love reading bout men transforming into hair beast. Only thing that would be the sprinkles on the sundae is if there was Cigar or pipe smoking with it. AWESOME Job PLEASE keep them coming
9/13/24, 9:01 PM
Ooo love it!! Can’t wait for the next chapter!!
9/13/24, 8:50 PM
Terrific!!
9/13/24, 8:39 PM
This is one of the hottest stories I've read in a long time. Please, keep going.
9/13/24, 6:30 PM
Yeah.......send it to me ;)