Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/30/17, 9:33 PM
More please.... arf
Anonymous
7/30/17, 8:59 PM
Well written and well crafted. Good story!
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/30/17, 8:43 PM
so much ignorance in here surrounding this story ... its actually rather entertaining to watch people show what kind of people they really are. i am enjoying the stupid negative comments almost as much as i enjoyed the story. btw ... i am one of those bigger guys so many are body shaming on here.
Jul 28, 2017
7/30/17, 8:38 PM
I really liked how you made something so erotic. Very nice story!
Jul 28, 2017
Donkbutt
7/30/17, 8:26 PM
Sniping anonymous comments with poor punctuation: that's a sickness. Loakachunk is writing fantasy, and doing a good job of it. If you've got problems with his style, skill or spelling, that's fine, give your critique. If you just don't like the content, shut up and move on. And try to remember that EVERYTHING written on this site is disgusting to someone out there but that doesn't mean their opinion is valid or welcome. Loakachunk, your themes aren't really my cup of tea but your writing is strong and descriptive and you really have talent. Please don't get discouraged by the loud mouth chucklefucks on here or elsewhere.
Anonymous
7/30/17, 8:06 PM
Arf arf!!
Anonymous
7/30/17, 7:48 PM
I love that beiber is becoming a mindless pup!!!!
AeonFlux
7/30/17, 6:27 PM
Perfect
Anonymous
7/30/17, 3:57 PM
Love how the jocks were humiliated by the pudgy guy ! Keep it up!!
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/30/17, 3:14 PM
This is irresponsible The author shouldn't encourage acceptance of obesity It's a sickness