Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/30/17, 1:05 PM
Super hot! Thanks alot and looking forward to the next chapter!
Jul 28, 2017
TimNJ
7/30/17, 11:30 AM
Ok, I just finished reading it and i LOVED IT. The author went right to the source of what makes a person "hot" : confidence! By hypnotizing him to not just accept but to REVEL in his size got me worked up! I often see overweight guys in NYC that I would totally do if they were gay! So i am really looking forward to more from this author. It is such a refreshing change from all the bland, waspy, red state jock fantasies populating most of the other stories. In fact, I applaud the author since there is no dorm, mp3 player, revenge plot, coach or incesr in the entire story! This is incredibly refreshing!
Anonymous
7/30/17, 11:08 AM
This story intrigued me. Keep writing. This is not a one chapter. See what happens when his power goes off the rails.
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/30/17, 11:02 AM
Ooooo 33 comments, whenever i see that i know the story will almost be beside the point! Let me read it now.
Anonymous
7/30/17, 10:58 AM
Pics were hot! Story was too.
Jul 10, 2017
Anonymous
7/30/17, 8:08 AM
One of the hottest stories that I have ever read. I hope there is more cause I cant stop thinking about it.
Anonymous
7/30/17, 8:05 AM
Hot. Can't wait for part 3.
Anonymous
7/30/17, 7:53 AM
This is amazing! please keep going!!! We all would like to see Neil control the hole city. Make the futbol team next!!
Anonymous
7/30/17, 7:12 AM
wait, so did Neil ever see these jocks' bare feet? I love bare feet more than socked feet!
Anonymous
7/30/17, 7:11 AM
sexy as always! And is it the finally time to show up the cop slaves ... >///////////<