Recent Comments

Jul 28, 2017
Donkbutt
7/30/17, 8:26 PM
Sniping anonymous comments with poor punctuation: that's a sickness. Loakachunk is writing fantasy, and doing a good job of it. If you've got problems with his style, skill or spelling, that's fine, give your critique. If you just don't like the content, shut up and move on. And try to remember that EVERYTHING written on this site is disgusting to someone out there but that doesn't mean their opinion is valid or welcome. Loakachunk, your themes aren't really my cup of tea but your writing is strong and descriptive and you really have talent. Please don't get discouraged by the loud mouth chucklefucks on here or elsewhere.
Anonymous
7/30/17, 8:06 PM
Arf arf!!
Anonymous
7/30/17, 7:48 PM
I love that beiber is becoming a mindless pup!!!!
AeonFlux
7/30/17, 6:27 PM
Perfect
Anonymous
7/30/17, 3:57 PM
Love how the jocks were humiliated by the pudgy guy ! Keep it up!!
Jul 28, 2017
Anonymous
7/30/17, 3:14 PM
This is irresponsible The author shouldn't encourage acceptance of obesity It's a sickness
Anonymous
7/30/17, 2:32 PM
please continue!!!
Anonymous
7/30/17, 1:05 PM
Super hot! Thanks alot and looking forward to the next chapter!
Jul 28, 2017
TimNJ
7/30/17, 11:30 AM
Ok, I just finished reading it and i LOVED IT. The author went right to the source of what makes a person "hot" : confidence! By hypnotizing him to not just accept but to REVEL in his size got me worked up! I often see overweight guys in NYC that I would totally do if they were gay! So i am really looking forward to more from this author. It is such a refreshing change from all the bland, waspy, red state jock fantasies populating most of the other stories. In fact, I applaud the author since there is no dorm, mp3 player, revenge plot, coach or incesr in the entire story! This is incredibly refreshing!
Anonymous
7/30/17, 11:08 AM
This story intrigued me. Keep writing. This is not a one chapter. See what happens when his power goes off the rails.