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9/12/24, 1:07 PM
Another great chapter. Thanks!

9/12/24, 1:17 PM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) Thank you for taking the trouble to reply. Don’t forget to rate too lol

9/13/24, 1:13 PM
@[Kyle Cicero](/user/show/10023983) Did rate it!

9/13/24, 5:04 PM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) 👍❤️
Anonymous
9/12/24, 8:50 AM
[ *Insert lame, self-pitying rant here* ]

9/12/24, 10:53 AM
@Anonymous If you find you can't post what you want to say because you're uncomfortable about how I, or anyone, might react to it here, then feel free to message me privately. I won't take anything you have to say as an attack or an insult. I find it hard to reach out, especially to be critical, so please don't feel isolated.

Anonymous
9/13/24, 5:11 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) No, if I'm being honest, it's been clear, pretty much from the beginning, that I've been trying to stick a square peg in a round hole. There comes a point where criticism stops being minor tweaks and starts becoming an outline for an entirely different story. There's nothing to be gained from discussion if the intended direction and the desired one diverge so sharply. In an ideal world, I'd stop wasting energy whining and instead actually write the kind of story that I want to read. Problem is, that'd require me to actually get off my ass and stop feeling sorry for myself. *Pfft*, yeah, that'd be the day...

9/13/24, 2:55 PM
@Anonymous If it helps, I do recommend writing your own story, regardless of whether you share it or if its just for yourself. I don't think our tastes and goals match up so I'm sure I'll keep disappointing you. Still, my reading tastes are different to my writing tastes, so I might well enjoy whatever you can cook up!
9/13/24, 2:18 PM
So happy to see another chapter of this delicious series <3
9/13/24, 1:34 PM
Love it! Hoping for more
9/13/24, 1:30 PM
Sub tops are lots of fun, this was great! I liked the new transformations; cocktongue is hot, so is the idea of being able to flex your cock thicker and make it vibrate. And as usual lots of great cum inflation. Good stuff!
Anonymous
9/13/24, 2:50 AM
Not bad!! Imaginative!!

9/13/24, 12:06 PM
@Anonymous Thanks!
Anonymous
9/13/24, 11:24 AM
I know you have a life, but I must say, finally you have given us an update 🤪 I was desperate and was worried you abandoned the story About the story, it would be funny that Axel is so dumb, that he doesn't know anything about how to deal with Theo ass, and that Theo "has to" do all the job to be properly fucked 🤪 But yes, Adam is definitely the real mastermind, having fun making his boys fuck Theo ass 😂😂
Sep 10, 2024
9/13/24, 9:38 AM
This was incredible. The exact kink of transformation I like to see - when everybody acts like it was always this way
9/13/24, 5:22 AM
This has been an interesting story so far. Wondering how it wil l go!

9/13/24, 8:24 AM
@[Anon529373](/user/show/541335) Time will tell 🤔🤭