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AnFHypno
7/26/17, 7:30 AM
I haven't ever commented here but you're doing well. A new story a day is sometimes a tall order. If you're getting comments on your editing a few hopefully helpful tips. Easiest one is set it down, do your first check. Come back the next day for a re-read. Read it backwards, it forces you to focus on each sentence. Read it out loud (heh, I claim no responsibility for doing so lol). And print it, grab a red pen and mark through every single word one by one deliberately. And of course someone with a fresh pair of eyes is always handy if you have that luxury. As for "is this the middle" - nyeh, it is your story. Craft it as you want. Everyone has a preference, some people like slow build ups. Some like quick and dirty. I'm not saying ignore your readers, just know what you want to make. (Ex. Star Wars we got 4 5 6.. And many years later we got 1 2 3) If you are intent on a story a day get a work flow that works for you, where say, you have one in editing, one newly written and one ready for final review. Only reason I am suggesting that level of intensity is the patron link. If you're writing for the fun of it then I'd say just take your time and enjoy! Hope it helps.
AeonFlux
7/26/17, 7:21 AM
Keep on writing........ a nice and easy approach ....... can't wait how it turns out
Anonymous
7/26/17, 5:04 AM
It's refreshing to read a story that had such a build up that you want to read more. Keep writing. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Anonymous
7/26/17, 12:57 AM
Keep up the good writing enjoyed this series
CigarDADDY
7/26/17, 12:33 AM
Another great start to another great story. Want his transformation to be a slow one,and one he is aware of. Like why is he smoking big maduros,and getting hard and horny when he does
Anonymous
7/26/17, 12:23 AM
The big question for me is why his father wants to turn him into this?
7/25/17, 11:36 PM
Can't wait to see how Tom the bully is handled. I hope he becomes a happy bottom boy for Daniel and/or John.
Anonymous
7/25/17, 10:56 PM
Love your alien parasite, virus, melon, etc... series!
Anonymous
7/25/17, 10:44 PM
Keep writing your stories are fantastic!!
Anonymous
7/25/17, 10:40 PM
Just saying, the form did not suck. Yes there were some grammar and spelling errors here and there, but for me they did not at all detract from the story. Super hot. I've got a think for huge meaty pecs, it get's me super hard.