Recent Comments

TimNJ
7/27/17, 10:09 AM
I love this story! Yes, I agree with the above poster, more with the soldier and having an Upper Class guy submit would be so erotic
SmokinSKINpunk
7/27/17, 9:42 AM
fuckin hot story man.
Anonymous
7/27/17, 9:24 AM
love the mongol warrior transformation ... cannot wait to see where this one goes
Anonymous
7/27/17, 8:41 AM
Great story, please keep going with it.
Anonymous
7/27/17, 8:30 AM
Please play with this military man some more! Btw,maybe a slave in a suit would be nice. A high class slave to be humiliated
7/27/17, 6:38 AM
Excited to read more.
Anonymous
7/27/17, 4:37 AM
More like this please!
webb025
7/27/17, 3:59 AM
I'm thinking about a continuation... as you can see, there seem to be some votes in favor and some against.
Anonymous
7/26/17, 7:31 PM
I'm new to the site and I'm reading back stories. So fucking hot! Great series.
Willie Cici
7/26/17, 7:22 PM
The advice you are receiving is right on the money. Writing -- the creative process of taking a story and seeing where your imagination takes you -- is the easy part. That's Day 1. Editing -- the tinkering of what you put on paper and refining, not only the language, but maybe even the story line -- the so much more difficult. That's Day 2, 3, 4, 5 and maybe 6. The first part of the editing is taking advantage of your Spell Check and Grammar Check int the word processing program you are using. MSWord has a good Spell/Grammar Check. It's in the 'Review Tab'. That should be your first level of edit (in my opinion), because it gives you proper usage and grammar issues, such as 'dangling participles' and nonsensical phrases. If you do that you will find a better finished product that is easy to read and makes for better story telling. Those are "form" issues. As for substance, you write whatever the hell you fell like writing. It's supposed to be for your pleasure. If people enjoy it, great. if they don't, that's on them. Keep writing. I want to see where your creative talent takes you.