Recent Comments

7/25/17, 10:30 PM
Damn I thought I checked it well enough. Thanks for the feedback guys! Always looking to better myself :)
GrowingGeek
7/25/17, 10:07 PM
I agree with the last comment - the buildup and showing the son's corruption into turning into this roided muscle freak would have been very hot to see. Plus, I feel like it would be much improved with a spelling and grammar check, and by an extra gap between paragraphs to make it easier to read. Solid effort though!
A San Francisco Reader
7/25/17, 9:40 PM
While I really enjoyed this story, I felt it started in the middle...Would have liked it more if you would have 'built-up' to the fucking scene, by developing how the father started giving his [clueless] son 'roid's] turning him into a huge muscle stud, perhaps even 'dumb'ing' him down a little with some M.C. tapes to go with the drug's...Developing his desire to have sex with another bro, [or his dad] more slowly as the drugs take effect....Just a thought..
Anonymous
7/25/17, 8:12 PM
Hot as fuck. Got off to both your stories.
Anonymous
7/25/17, 8:03 PM
super great.....more please
Anonymous
7/25/17, 6:16 PM
Need more hardcore parasite. Maybe one that jump from body to body absorbing its hosts until theyre empty husk.
Anonymous
7/25/17, 5:55 PM
Wonder if not wish fulfillment but desperate need would change the context and make it a more attractive and challenging story concept for you... Just a thought: contemplate, dismiss, or deride it as you like.
Anonymous
7/25/17, 5:34 PM
Please finish it!!! It's just getting to the good bit! I love the thought of beiber becoming an obedient pup
Anonymous
7/25/17, 4:06 PM
Why would death suggest STD's? John is said to be in his 60s, it would be easy to say Paul was similarly aged. It's not unlikely for someone in their 60s to die of natural causes.
7/25/17, 3:10 PM
I basically write horror stories, so a story about a truly beneficial symbiote wouldn't fit my style. Most of the beneficial symbiote stories I've read are primarily about wish-fulfillment, and I'm not a fan of that story type.