Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/26/17, 11:23 AM
erotic horror.... what an interesting genre xD
AnFHypno
7/26/17, 7:30 AM
I haven't ever commented here but you're doing well. A new story a day is sometimes a tall order. If you're getting comments on your editing a few hopefully helpful tips. Easiest one is set it down, do your first check. Come back the next day for a re-read. Read it backwards, it forces you to focus on each sentence. Read it out loud (heh, I claim no responsibility for doing so lol). And print it, grab a red pen and mark through every single word one by one deliberately. And of course someone with a fresh pair of eyes is always handy if you have that luxury. As for "is this the middle" - nyeh, it is your story. Craft it as you want. Everyone has a preference, some people like slow build ups. Some like quick and dirty. I'm not saying ignore your readers, just know what you want to make. (Ex. Star Wars we got 4 5 6.. And many years later we got 1 2 3) If you are intent on a story a day get a work flow that works for you, where say, you have one in editing, one newly written and one ready for final review. Only reason I am suggesting that level of intensity is the patron link. If you're writing for the fun of it then I'd say just take your time and enjoy! Hope it helps.
AeonFlux
7/26/17, 7:21 AM
Keep on writing........ a nice and easy approach ....... can't wait how it turns out
Anonymous
7/26/17, 5:04 AM
It's refreshing to read a story that had such a build up that you want to read more. Keep writing. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Anonymous
7/26/17, 12:57 AM
Keep up the good writing enjoyed this series
CigarDADDY
7/26/17, 12:33 AM
Another great start to another great story. Want his transformation to be a slow one,and one he is aware of. Like why is he smoking big maduros,and getting hard and horny when he does
Anonymous
7/26/17, 12:23 AM
The big question for me is why his father wants to turn him into this?
7/25/17, 11:36 PM
Can't wait to see how Tom the bully is handled. I hope he becomes a happy bottom boy for Daniel and/or John.
Anonymous
7/25/17, 10:56 PM
Love your alien parasite, virus, melon, etc... series!
Anonymous
7/25/17, 10:44 PM
Keep writing your stories are fantastic!!