Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/25/17, 2:09 AM
I came so hard, thank you
Anonymous
7/25/17, 2:03 AM
Great job, thank you. Looking forward to reading more from you
7/25/17, 1:33 AM
Please continue!
Redbird
7/25/17, 1:31 AM
I loved it. I has good pacing and great character devolpment.I like tour descriptions of your characters too.
andrew
7/25/17, 1:04 AM
Figured it out. I had written that it was a part of a series called Muscle Milk
7/25/17, 12:34 AM
Yea I have no idea. I was like THATS MINE! Hahaha. I guess it's cause there's another story with the same name.
Anonymous
7/25/17, 12:32 AM
How is it possible?
Anonymous
7/24/17, 11:57 PM
If you mean by style, mystery? setting? so far it reminds me of something out of Harry Potter, so i like, and the intrigue of where it will go? and has a timeless feel? I like the opening vulnerability of the shop keeper John and patron, Danny. Danny, let me get the kettle going sounds gaelic or irish so again, timelessness, ageless, inviting, , I like the slow subtle, easy, warm start
Anonymous
7/24/17, 11:16 PM
why is this story linked to that of another author??
7/24/17, 10:38 PM
Great story!