Recent Comments

Andrew
7/24/17, 8:20 PM
For sure! Thank you for the feedback! I will make sure to do a better grammar check and spelling check :). I know how that ruin the story sometimes
Jul 23, 2017
Pistola
7/24/17, 7:30 PM
Great story...look forward to more.
Anonymous
7/24/17, 7:10 PM
Very very nice More please
Cyb
7/24/17, 7:09 PM
Thank you for your reply. As long as you are enjoy writing the story itself then it's all good, just be careful because everyone "gets off" on different ideas, so there's no way you can please everyone. HOWEVER, because people were attracted to this story due to chapter 1, that chapter is a good premise as where the core of the story should be; at least that's how I publish my book.
7/24/17, 6:42 PM
I made a picture of what Ryan Paul might look like, in case anyone's interested: http://www.morphthing.com/image/97299182-rand-jpg-3f3943d8-cea4-4f6b-96ac-3c25fd3ef24e-jpg?key=cea57fd2ad701dc8b44d27f69431af82
Anonymous
7/24/17, 3:50 PM
Story is great, but please take a few moments to run through spell and grammar check.
AWK
7/24/17, 2:37 PM
New chapters new people, maybe a dad looking for a son
Anonymous
7/24/17, 10:33 AM
Even better than the original! Looking forward to more.
JamieTi684
7/24/17, 9:50 AM
Amazing! Can't wait for more!
Anonymous
7/24/17, 9:38 AM
why have you interrupted a such fabulous story?