Recent Comments

Cyb
7/24/17, 3:50 AM
I don't think Webb was being manipulative, because his story IS good enough to attract readers without pulling strings, our positive feedback merely gave him extra stamina/idea to continue; all writers could use that. Rapid writing can be very exhausting, and Webb managed to do it in succession, for that I am grateful.
Jul 23, 2017
7/24/17, 3:19 AM
Oh that was hot. I love the way Austin became a 'good girl' for Jesse. This was cool and I look forward to the idea of what Jesse can get up to with those programs.
7/24/17, 2:45 AM
Just my two cents: First: This story is very sexy and I enjoy it a lot. I'm also a fan of multiple plots coming together to serve the major plot, if you can't tell from my main series lol Second: Personally, I write to turn myself on first and foremost. I share it and hope it hits a nerve with others. If it doesn't, eh, whatevs. If it does, woo, I helped guys cum! But, like I said, the main goal I have is writing a story that fills a gap in the erotic hypno area that I haven't personally seen in other stories. Regardless of why I write, it seems to me that you're writing mostly for the positive reviews. That, in and of itself, isn't a bad thing. I enjoy the positive feedback for sure. But, well, it's not the single basis for what I write or what I choose to continue. From my (possibly flawed) perspective, you seem to be putting too much into whether or not people fawn over your writing or not. Honestly, ask yourself, do YOU want to continue the story? If it's yes, do it. If it's no, don't. To be frank, I feel like it's a bit manipulative to your fans to force them to write positive reviews or e-mail you in order to get you to continue it. You're the writer. Decide if YOU see where it can go next. Decide if YOU would enjoy continuing it. Decide if YOU would prefer moving on to something else. Third: this is an erotic gay hypnosis fetish story. I don't think anyone needs to be taking it all that seriously :D
Anonymous
7/24/17, 2:19 AM
Really enjoyed this first part. Looking forward to more. Thanks for writing.
Nachtigall
7/24/17, 2:07 AM
Solid rewrite. please continue with the other stories.
Anonymous
7/24/17, 2:07 AM
I love the redneck cowboy thing! More please'
Anonymous
7/24/17, 1:38 AM
So fucking sexy
Jul 23, 2017
Anonymous
7/23/17, 10:03 PM
Wow, so he's gonna plow his ass AND get him some pussy?! I need a friend like that! As a bi guy, I always love it when they leave the original sex drive intact. Maybe we should visit these three somewhere down the road... What if Austin used the subliminals on El Chica Columbiana and invites Jesse over for a threeway-but then Jesse puts HIM under and has the Colombian girl blow Austin while Jesse plows his ass!
Anonymous
7/23/17, 8:30 PM
I'm hard. Good story.
Jul 20, 2017
Anonymous
7/23/17, 8:26 PM
Billy got Semaj, Luke got Davon, and Ian got Pablito. Everyone's happy. Even the ex-wife got Tiffany. My question is this: if he divorced her, then why would he care who she ended up with?