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Jul 23, 2017
Anonymous
7/24/17, 8:58 AM
looking forward to seeing perhaps a more femme transformation ... more of a ... good GIRL
webb025
7/24/17, 8:56 AM
I'm not writing to get praise -- a lot of the emails I get don't contain 'praise' but criticisms and suggestions. I'm writing for fun and to get people off. If people aren't getting off on a particular story, then why continue it? For example, much to my surprise, in all the email and comments, I got only one mention of the Marines subplot, so I figured it wasn't working and I dropped it. When I'm reading a story, I hate hitting long bad sections that turn me off. I've also read stories that started out great and then went on too long. That's why I'm sensitive to well-thought-out emails and comments when deciding what to continue and what to drop. As for the quick succession thing, sometimes it just comes pouring out of me, and sometimes it just dribbles out slowly. And that's true of my writing, too!
Anonymous
7/24/17, 8:30 AM
I love these stories but I thing you should drop the teacher story. I personally want you to continue the Bieber story and see where that leads... and I'm into the little we have heard about tower boy. Please don't stop writing because one or two people on here are hating. If they don't like it then they can skip the stories... simple right?
Anonymous
7/24/17, 7:24 AM
I love this series! Are you ever going to complete it?
Jul 23, 2017
Anonymous
7/24/17, 6:35 AM
Your best story in a while!
Anonymous
7/24/17, 6:33 AM
Loved it! Keep these time stop stories coming!
7/24/17, 6:21 AM
I feel ya. Not trying to be antagonistic in the slightest. Just how I was interpreting the messages at the end of the chapters :) I'm merely hoping that Webb is writing because he enjoys it and has a good vision, not merely because of the comments and e-mails. I just personally believe a writer does their best when they are writing to impress and entertain themselves rather than everyone else. And writing a series in quick succession is definitely something I need to work on personally...lol
Cyb
7/24/17, 3:50 AM
I don't think Webb was being manipulative, because his story IS good enough to attract readers without pulling strings, our positive feedback merely gave him extra stamina/idea to continue; all writers could use that. Rapid writing can be very exhausting, and Webb managed to do it in succession, for that I am grateful.
Jul 23, 2017
7/24/17, 3:19 AM
Oh that was hot. I love the way Austin became a 'good girl' for Jesse. This was cool and I look forward to the idea of what Jesse can get up to with those programs.
7/24/17, 2:45 AM
Just my two cents: First: This story is very sexy and I enjoy it a lot. I'm also a fan of multiple plots coming together to serve the major plot, if you can't tell from my main series lol Second: Personally, I write to turn myself on first and foremost. I share it and hope it hits a nerve with others. If it doesn't, eh, whatevs. If it does, woo, I helped guys cum! But, like I said, the main goal I have is writing a story that fills a gap in the erotic hypno area that I haven't personally seen in other stories. Regardless of why I write, it seems to me that you're writing mostly for the positive reviews. That, in and of itself, isn't a bad thing. I enjoy the positive feedback for sure. But, well, it's not the single basis for what I write or what I choose to continue. From my (possibly flawed) perspective, you seem to be putting too much into whether or not people fawn over your writing or not. Honestly, ask yourself, do YOU want to continue the story? If it's yes, do it. If it's no, don't. To be frank, I feel like it's a bit manipulative to your fans to force them to write positive reviews or e-mail you in order to get you to continue it. You're the writer. Decide if YOU see where it can go next. Decide if YOU would enjoy continuing it. Decide if YOU would prefer moving on to something else. Third: this is an erotic gay hypnosis fetish story. I don't think anyone needs to be taking it all that seriously :D