Recent Comments

Cyb
7/24/17, 7:09 PM
Thank you for your reply. As long as you are enjoy writing the story itself then it's all good, just be careful because everyone "gets off" on different ideas, so there's no way you can please everyone. HOWEVER, because people were attracted to this story due to chapter 1, that chapter is a good premise as where the core of the story should be; at least that's how I publish my book.
7/24/17, 6:42 PM
I made a picture of what Ryan Paul might look like, in case anyone's interested: http://www.morphthing.com/image/97299182-rand-jpg-3f3943d8-cea4-4f6b-96ac-3c25fd3ef24e-jpg?key=cea57fd2ad701dc8b44d27f69431af82
Anonymous
7/24/17, 3:50 PM
Story is great, but please take a few moments to run through spell and grammar check.
AWK
7/24/17, 2:37 PM
New chapters new people, maybe a dad looking for a son
Anonymous
7/24/17, 10:33 AM
Even better than the original! Looking forward to more.
JamieTi684
7/24/17, 9:50 AM
Amazing! Can't wait for more!
Anonymous
7/24/17, 9:38 AM
why have you interrupted a such fabulous story?
Anonymous
7/24/17, 9:11 AM
We want more! We want more! We want more! Beautiful introduction to an amazing story
Jul 23, 2017
Anonymous
7/24/17, 8:58 AM
looking forward to seeing perhaps a more femme transformation ... more of a ... good GIRL
webb025
7/24/17, 8:56 AM
I'm not writing to get praise -- a lot of the emails I get don't contain 'praise' but criticisms and suggestions. I'm writing for fun and to get people off. If people aren't getting off on a particular story, then why continue it? For example, much to my surprise, in all the email and comments, I got only one mention of the Marines subplot, so I figured it wasn't working and I dropped it. When I'm reading a story, I hate hitting long bad sections that turn me off. I've also read stories that started out great and then went on too long. That's why I'm sensitive to well-thought-out emails and comments when deciding what to continue and what to drop. As for the quick succession thing, sometimes it just comes pouring out of me, and sometimes it just dribbles out slowly. And that's true of my writing, too!