Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/23/17, 7:36 PM
Favorite story of all time. Please do more!
CK
7/23/17, 6:55 PM
I like the overall theme, just slow down the scenes. What I loved best about your earlier works was the detailed scenes where the men succumbed to mind control and were taken. Now it seems like it's all about the numbers and doing things with the push of a button. If you don't want to continue it's your choice. I would love if you broke off the marine storyline into it's own story. I nice long story about marine hunks being slowly turned into slaves would be great. Hypnosis and breaking down the macho men in uniform into gay men is my thing, mild humiliation is best. The full jump into all out fetish from the go ruins the buildup for me. Thanks for the stories!
Cyb
7/23/17, 6:38 PM
Curious, this ANONYMOUS dude is saying that the story is fine, yet suspect the author of receiving positive reviews? Now that's a veiled jealousy at its finest. I can't speak for other posts, but the first reply was mine, I didn't use a nickname because I saw no reason to, but guess someone is bitter.
Axel
7/23/17, 5:24 PM
I don't think he ever once said he was getting 'praise' or 'Reviews. He says he gets messages for him to keep continuing. I don't know where you come up with that and the other part is just your opinion you don't have to call him out because you got mad. Are you a writer that doesnt get comments? Is that why you get angry to see his comments? He takes time writing these stories for free for the people that enjoy his story so why should he flex here and there? I'm one of the people that email him and I'm sure I'm not the only one. So that part of him getting emails isnt false either.
webb025
7/23/17, 5:14 PM
Well guys? Maybe you should sign the reviews. I've had stories that seemed to hit a nerve and get reviews and emails, and others that dropped with a silent thunk. I have no way of assessing whether I'm going the right way or wasting my time on a particular story without feedback. Even then, when I adjusted a storyline based on criticism in the reviews, I got criticized for changing the storyline! So I can't win. The response on this story has gone down over the last 2 parts, but not disappeared. But I'll likely end it here.
7/23/17, 5:10 PM
Great start! I love the slow series of hypnotic inductions, and I can't wait to read what happens next!
Anonymous
7/23/17, 4:20 PM
I think the story is fine and all, but I feel like I need to call complete BS on all these reviews that you claim you are receiving. I believe it is you commenting on your own story constantly. I also doubt you are receiving these constant emails. I'm not criticizing your writing, but I don't want to hear you bragging at the start of every chapter about how much praise you are receiving (especially when I'm thinking that praise is BS).
7/23/17, 4:02 PM
Every time you need with a cliffhanger. I want more. This could be quite the epic if you wanted, and I'd enjoy it all.
Anonymous
7/23/17, 3:40 PM
moar please ^_^
Jul 23, 2017
Anonymous
7/23/17, 11:13 AM
Your last 2 stories are not showing up in link other then that an OK story