Recent Comments

webb025
7/23/17, 5:14 PM
Well guys? Maybe you should sign the reviews. I've had stories that seemed to hit a nerve and get reviews and emails, and others that dropped with a silent thunk. I have no way of assessing whether I'm going the right way or wasting my time on a particular story without feedback. Even then, when I adjusted a storyline based on criticism in the reviews, I got criticized for changing the storyline! So I can't win. The response on this story has gone down over the last 2 parts, but not disappeared. But I'll likely end it here.
7/23/17, 5:10 PM
Great start! I love the slow series of hypnotic inductions, and I can't wait to read what happens next!
Anonymous
7/23/17, 4:20 PM
I think the story is fine and all, but I feel like I need to call complete BS on all these reviews that you claim you are receiving. I believe it is you commenting on your own story constantly. I also doubt you are receiving these constant emails. I'm not criticizing your writing, but I don't want to hear you bragging at the start of every chapter about how much praise you are receiving (especially when I'm thinking that praise is BS).
7/23/17, 4:02 PM
Every time you need with a cliffhanger. I want more. This could be quite the epic if you wanted, and I'd enjoy it all.
Anonymous
7/23/17, 3:40 PM
moar please ^_^
Jul 23, 2017
Anonymous
7/23/17, 11:13 AM
Your last 2 stories are not showing up in link other then that an OK story
Anonymous
7/23/17, 9:11 AM
So hot. Please continue.
Anonymous
7/23/17, 8:24 AM
cant wait for last part
Anonymous
7/23/17, 5:27 AM
so excited for the next chapter!
Anonymous
7/23/17, 3:45 AM
It's getting hot :)