Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/23/17, 9:11 AM
So hot. Please continue.
Anonymous
7/23/17, 8:24 AM
cant wait for last part
Anonymous
7/23/17, 5:27 AM
so excited for the next chapter!
Anonymous
7/23/17, 3:45 AM
It's getting hot :)
Anonymous
7/23/17, 3:41 AM
Enjoyed it very much. More, please.
Anonymous
7/23/17, 3:39 AM
*not all changes *short on time
Manluv
7/23/17, 3:39 AM
Thanks al for the comments. To the last poster, you make some great points and I agree that Hiroki's change is rather complete, rather quickly. Nit all changes will be so abrupt. I have a rough outline for the rest of the story, but I am short in time. I hope to get Day Two up in the next couple of weeks. Thanks for reading.
Anonymous
7/23/17, 3:28 AM
Please continue! Make him into Mr. Brown's new loverbear!
Anonymous
7/23/17, 2:30 AM
FFS how hard would it have been to put some paragraphs and line breaks into this? I find it very difficult to read dense blocks of text like this and if people can't read it you've wasted your time and theirs.
Anonymous
7/23/17, 2:04 AM
Although long I really enjoyed this series if you feel like writing more would like to see a follow up seeing how the company is now run and if dad gets involved