Recent Comments

Manluv
7/23/17, 3:39 AM
Thanks al for the comments. To the last poster, you make some great points and I agree that Hiroki's change is rather complete, rather quickly. Nit all changes will be so abrupt. I have a rough outline for the rest of the story, but I am short in time. I hope to get Day Two up in the next couple of weeks. Thanks for reading.
Anonymous
7/23/17, 3:28 AM
Please continue! Make him into Mr. Brown's new loverbear!
Anonymous
7/23/17, 2:30 AM
FFS how hard would it have been to put some paragraphs and line breaks into this? I find it very difficult to read dense blocks of text like this and if people can't read it you've wasted your time and theirs.
Anonymous
7/23/17, 2:04 AM
Although long I really enjoyed this series if you feel like writing more would like to see a follow up seeing how the company is now run and if dad gets involved
Anonymous
7/23/17, 1:36 AM
Great job thank you!
Jul 20, 2017
Anonymous
7/22/17, 10:35 PM
what happened to billy......the ex husband should have gotten him
Anonymous
7/22/17, 8:40 PM
Hey, I could do a bit more, great chapter!
Anonymous
7/22/17, 6:47 PM
PRETTY PLEASE keep it coming!! This is truly incredibly hot and sexy!! Can you add in things like diapers, dick shaped pacifiers, etc?
Bucca
7/22/17, 5:48 PM
More please, first part gave me a boner!
AeonFlux
7/22/17, 4:54 PM
Next chapter ....... PLEASE 👍👍👍👍