Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/19/17, 9:01 AM
How about the next stage where he is turned into a big, fat, greasy, middle aged arab?
Anonymous
7/19/17, 8:53 AM
You as the writer must enjoy writing it first. :3 That said, I commented before that the reason I enjoyed this story was because of the theme of "masters" ordering the "slaves" to humiliate them. While that part derailed a bit in Chapter 2 (I do love Master Guerrilla's family scene), you drew it back in Chapter 3, all is well now. :)
Anonymous
7/19/17, 4:31 AM
It's been fantastic. More please.
UchihaDEMS
7/19/17, 4:21 AM
I think the story jumped the shark since chapter 1 and went to the moon in chapter 2. I love it.
Anonymous
7/19/17, 2:51 AM
This is amazing!!!!
Anonymous
7/19/17, 2:51 AM
I love this so much! Keep it up!!!
Anonymous
7/19/17, 2:31 AM
That was outstanding----it just built and built and the descriptions were most vivid.
Anonymous
7/19/17, 2:20 AM
Sage advice. Write, edit, re-edit, let the story simmer, re-visit, re-edit, and then post. Write what you enjoy writing. Of course, twists and surprises are always fun to read, but keep your mind happy and active.
Anonymous
7/19/17, 2:14 AM
I think these, they were great things to read. although I understand that as a writer you want your works to be popular, listening to many different opinions and trying to please everyone is unattainable. Just go for what you want to write, knowing that sometimes It will not draw that much attention. In the same sense, when you want to drop something, just drop it; even if a lot of us want to read more of it, you don't need to keep working on something just for the sake of popularity. I think your writing is quite good tbh, just don't let a storm of comments take you away from your own storytelling
Anonymous
7/19/17, 12:07 AM
Story jumped the shark at the beginning of Chapter 2