Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/19/17, 12:07 AM
Story jumped the shark at the beginning of Chapter 2
Anonymous
7/18/17, 11:32 PM
You're just getting it interesting.
redbird
7/18/17, 10:54 PM
A very fun and hot. Although the story works as stand alone a sequel would work.
Anonymous
7/18/17, 8:05 PM
Is it a jock dorm? or a jock dom?
Anonymous
7/18/17, 7:02 PM
I'd love to see more!
webb025
7/18/17, 6:57 PM
I'm not teasing. I'm just trying to determine if this story has "jumped the shark" before I decide whether to add to it. Have some of the subplots gone too far?
7/18/17, 1:52 PM
You wrote that ending, hinting that Prof Merk is going to start using a helmet, and you're finished? Why tease everyone? Why, why, why? Jokes aside, it's been awesome to see something new from you. I'd love to read more.
Anonymous
7/18/17, 11:21 AM
I love it thank you!
Anonymous
7/18/17, 9:13 AM
So good can't wait for the next chapter
Anonymous
7/18/17, 9:12 AM
oh you cannot stop now ... there is so much more potential here ... like the mock wedding and the basketball team, professor merk and jonas ...