Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/19/17, 2:51 AM
This is amazing!!!!
Anonymous
7/19/17, 2:51 AM
I love this so much! Keep it up!!!
Anonymous
7/19/17, 2:31 AM
That was outstanding----it just built and built and the descriptions were most vivid.
Anonymous
7/19/17, 2:20 AM
Sage advice. Write, edit, re-edit, let the story simmer, re-visit, re-edit, and then post. Write what you enjoy writing. Of course, twists and surprises are always fun to read, but keep your mind happy and active.
Anonymous
7/19/17, 2:14 AM
I think these, they were great things to read. although I understand that as a writer you want your works to be popular, listening to many different opinions and trying to please everyone is unattainable. Just go for what you want to write, knowing that sometimes It will not draw that much attention. In the same sense, when you want to drop something, just drop it; even if a lot of us want to read more of it, you don't need to keep working on something just for the sake of popularity. I think your writing is quite good tbh, just don't let a storm of comments take you away from your own storytelling
Anonymous
7/19/17, 12:07 AM
Story jumped the shark at the beginning of Chapter 2
Anonymous
7/18/17, 11:32 PM
You're just getting it interesting.
redbird
7/18/17, 10:54 PM
A very fun and hot. Although the story works as stand alone a sequel would work.
Anonymous
7/18/17, 8:05 PM
Is it a jock dorm? or a jock dom?
Anonymous
7/18/17, 7:02 PM
I'd love to see more!