Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/18/17, 9:12 AM
oh you cannot stop now ... there is so much more potential here ... like the mock wedding and the basketball team, professor merk and jonas ...
Anonymous
7/18/17, 8:08 AM
That was terrific Great work
Anonymous
7/18/17, 6:35 AM
Nice one! Your stories always really Hot! Esp the mind bending ones
7/18/17, 5:38 AM
So hot. I hope the machine gets very popular.
Anonymous
7/18/17, 3:48 AM
Tbh, with the brief kiss on the lips Scott gave Tim, the way Tim just happens to know how to convince Scott's manager, and the increasing gay openness and homoerotic overtones, feeling like it's Tim who is in true control... pretty hot, overall, though. Keep it up
Anonymous
7/18/17, 2:51 AM
Can't wait for the next part!
Anonymous
7/18/17, 2:37 AM
Looking forward to seeing where it would go. An interesting set-up but need a few more chapters to find it's promising. This one did have a hook.
Anonymous
7/18/17, 2:33 AM
FINALLY!!! I love stories where the one who hypnotizes or controls someone isn't a complete asshole, that they're decent people and though the practice itself is questionable at best, it doesn't take away from them actually being nice to their slave and genuinely wanting their best interests. It's such a breath of fresh air!!
TrenSed
7/18/17, 2:14 AM
Please, Please, Please continue this
Anonymous
7/18/17, 12:57 AM
yep this is good. Clearly Brad is pulling the strings here.