Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/19/17, 2:14 AM
I think these, they were great things to read. although I understand that as a writer you want your works to be popular, listening to many different opinions and trying to please everyone is unattainable. Just go for what you want to write, knowing that sometimes It will not draw that much attention. In the same sense, when you want to drop something, just drop it; even if a lot of us want to read more of it, you don't need to keep working on something just for the sake of popularity. I think your writing is quite good tbh, just don't let a storm of comments take you away from your own storytelling
Anonymous
7/19/17, 12:07 AM
Story jumped the shark at the beginning of Chapter 2
Anonymous
7/18/17, 11:32 PM
You're just getting it interesting.
redbird
7/18/17, 10:54 PM
A very fun and hot. Although the story works as stand alone a sequel would work.
Anonymous
7/18/17, 8:05 PM
Is it a jock dorm? or a jock dom?
Anonymous
7/18/17, 7:02 PM
I'd love to see more!
webb025
7/18/17, 6:57 PM
I'm not teasing. I'm just trying to determine if this story has "jumped the shark" before I decide whether to add to it. Have some of the subplots gone too far?
7/18/17, 1:52 PM
You wrote that ending, hinting that Prof Merk is going to start using a helmet, and you're finished? Why tease everyone? Why, why, why? Jokes aside, it's been awesome to see something new from you. I'd love to read more.
Anonymous
7/18/17, 11:21 AM
I love it thank you!
Anonymous
7/18/17, 9:13 AM
So good can't wait for the next chapter