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9/12/24, 5:16 PM
Keep going !
9/12/24, 5:15 PM
I like this, please keep going
9/12/24, 1:50 PM
How about a sequel? Markus' family returns home. He gives a carton to his son, who shares it with his friends at school.

9/12/24, 4:22 PM
@[hairy and hard](/user/show/1184877) Nice idea, love the family element! Have a few other irons in the fire right now but I'll deffo keep it in mind!
Sep 7, 2024
Anonymous
9/12/24, 4:16 PM
I love your stories so much, that was so hot.
tim
9/12/24, 3:14 PM
hot!!! with added horse hormone!!! look forward to the next chapter...
9/12/24, 8:17 AM
This is an amazing story and there are many of us who appreciate these stories and it's great to find this space to read material like this. Thank you so much for writing this story. I have enjoyed every single chapter and love every line. The part when Jay first sat down was perfectly described: "The suit felt like a straitjacket, the tie a noose as his necktie kept rubbing the base of his Adam’s apple, and the shoes pinching his feet digging into his heels. He shifted again, trying to ease the pressure on his back from the hard pew, but there was no escape from the discomfort." and then I oved it when he bore his testimony about recognising the errors of his past life but especially when we got the additional “I can’t wait to receive the priesthood and fully dedicate my life to spreading the word of God’s.” This really opens the door for some more exciting chapters and another part of the journey. (PLEASE!) I especially loved it when he described feeling "like a puppet, his strings pulled by an unseen hand. Every word was a lie, yet he couldn’t stop himself from saying them." This was so hot!

9/12/24, 1:05 PM
@[BSuited](/user/show/10003178) You're putting it exactly how I feel. It's a great story and the descriptive writing of Jay slowly losing himself is very hot.
Feb 3, 2014
9/12/24, 12:48 PM
The tags and synopsis made me think tjis was gonna be a very different story, but very sexy!
9/12/24, 5:52 AM
Ooh hell yeah. Happy to read the new chapter.

9/12/24, 10:39 AM
@[Anon529373](/user/show/541335) Thank you! I'll try and keep them coming, flu permitting,...
Anonymous
9/12/24, 8:47 AM
Amazing and lance seems to becoming more masochistic. Hope for more wedgies
9/12/24, 8:02 AM
Superb development and growth in every single chapter. As soon as I read the line where Jay nodded, his resolve strengthening and he said “You’re right. I need to do this,” the whole story moved up another level. His slow dawning about how much he needed to change was absolutely uplifting and so enjoyable to read. I particularly enjoyed the scene after the shaving: "When Goodie finished, Jay ran a hand over his now smooth face, marvelling at the transformation. “I can’t believe how much better I look,” he said, beaming. “Thank you, Elder Goodie. I feel so much more… in compliance.” These moments of attitude adjustment and compliance really made this whole chapter a a very joyful, exciting and arousing read. The whole transformation of his attire was superbly detailed and descriptive. I was especially pleased that the tie felt tight on him around his collar and that the shoes were highly polished and also pinched him as they were so rigid. This type of detail and observation really makes these stories extra special. Thank you for a really excellent chapter here