Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/17/17, 4:40 AM
Loved it!
Ken
7/17/17, 4:31 AM
You did a FANTASTIC job on these stories....LOVED them all. Please continue writing.
Anonymous
7/17/17, 4:24 AM
Another great entry!
webb025
7/17/17, 4:02 AM
Hey, after part 1 I got email from longtime readers who thought daddies were hot, so I put in daddies. That seems to have turned off some guys. The most enthusiastic emails I've gotten lately have been about Masters Bigfoot and the Mindless Musclebots. So If I do add a part 4, I'll probably leave out the Gorilla family. But look, this story is structured with independent subplots. If one starts turning you off, just skip down to the next subsection. Don't worry, that will not detract from the literary integrity of the work. :)
Anonymous
7/17/17, 1:20 AM
Thank you for sharing this with us. One of my favorite stories on this site for sure! I love how there were no standard sex scenes; each one had its own unique flavor. I agree with what the other comments were conveying, but the sex was immensely hot, so I don't mind. Hope to see more stories from you in the future!
Anonymous
7/17/17, 1:11 AM
i like the end. Good job on this long piece :)
7/17/17, 1:04 AM
Wow, what a random end. So not what was expected or even showcased earlier. I'm really not sure what happened but the story became something different. I'm actually sad on how it ended considering how awesome the other parts were.
Anonymous
7/17/17, 12:38 AM
i don't understand what made John to be such a complete bastard to these guys. Did I miss something motivating him? I just wonder why he did these things. I'm not a fan of homophobes but it seems like there was no purpose in John's actions. The story was good and the evolution of some characters was great. I like straight to gay forced change stories but I guess I needed to know why. Excellent story otherwise.
7/16/17, 8:55 PM
Write what you like, my friend. No story is going to appeal to everyone and everyone is certainly a critic, lol. I, myself, really enjoy the incest scenes. For me, what really makes this story sexy is how the 'slaves' have tized the 'Masters' thinking the Masters are controlling this stuff. It's hot that the straight jocks and family members have been so mindfucked that they believe they WANT the slaves doing all this stuff to them. I've personally loved all three chapters. But, as I said before, the only person you should be writing to impress is yourself :)
Anonymous
7/16/17, 7:00 PM
I agree chapter 1 was the best because it was told from a clueless victim's point of view, but you are the writer and we are reading your story for free, so write however your heart guides you.