Recent Comments

7/16/17, 8:55 PM
Write what you like, my friend. No story is going to appeal to everyone and everyone is certainly a critic, lol. I, myself, really enjoy the incest scenes. For me, what really makes this story sexy is how the 'slaves' have tized the 'Masters' thinking the Masters are controlling this stuff. It's hot that the straight jocks and family members have been so mindfucked that they believe they WANT the slaves doing all this stuff to them. I've personally loved all three chapters. But, as I said before, the only person you should be writing to impress is yourself :)
Anonymous
7/16/17, 7:00 PM
I agree chapter 1 was the best because it was told from a clueless victim's point of view, but you are the writer and we are reading your story for free, so write however your heart guides you.
Anonymous
7/16/17, 6:49 PM
Excellent work Great series Thank you
Anonymous
7/16/17, 5:39 PM
Thanks for posting. I enjoy watching the homophobes get what's coming to them.
Anonymous
7/16/17, 5:03 PM
Great story!!! Loved it!!!!
Anonymous
7/16/17, 5:03 PM
That's right, Webb. Write whatever you like -- even if its crap. Chapter 1 was hot because of the college scene. I agree with one of the comments that objected to the incest and horseplay at home. Go back to what made the boys sexy sluts -- college. There is so much potential on a college campus.
Willie Cici
7/16/17, 5:00 PM
Thank you for the compliment. To answer your question, as to the number of stories, yes, and as to the ending, no. Critics bemoaned the lack of a time line in this series. That's true, because there is no time line in eternity. However, as I progressed with the series, I decided to end the story with a date certain, Jan 1, 2000, with the same fuss that was made over the first babies born at 12:00:01am on NewYears2000. The pic inspired some of the over the top theatrics of the story.
Anonymous
7/16/17, 4:23 PM
Great work!! Did you envision this ending when you started ? I have been impressed with you creativity!!
Anonymous
7/16/17, 4:01 PM
First one was written from jock's point of view. That's also what made it so hot. It was very personal and highly descriptive. The later chapters lacked this point of view.
Anonymous
7/16/17, 12:08 PM
wonderful, thank you!