Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/16/17, 5:03 PM
Great story!!! Loved it!!!!
Anonymous
7/16/17, 5:03 PM
That's right, Webb. Write whatever you like -- even if its crap. Chapter 1 was hot because of the college scene. I agree with one of the comments that objected to the incest and horseplay at home. Go back to what made the boys sexy sluts -- college. There is so much potential on a college campus.
Willie Cici
7/16/17, 5:00 PM
Thank you for the compliment. To answer your question, as to the number of stories, yes, and as to the ending, no. Critics bemoaned the lack of a time line in this series. That's true, because there is no time line in eternity. However, as I progressed with the series, I decided to end the story with a date certain, Jan 1, 2000, with the same fuss that was made over the first babies born at 12:00:01am on NewYears2000. The pic inspired some of the over the top theatrics of the story.
Anonymous
7/16/17, 4:23 PM
Great work!! Did you envision this ending when you started ? I have been impressed with you creativity!!
Anonymous
7/16/17, 4:01 PM
First one was written from jock's point of view. That's also what made it so hot. It was very personal and highly descriptive. The later chapters lacked this point of view.
Anonymous
7/16/17, 12:08 PM
wonderful, thank you!
Anonymous
7/16/17, 11:03 AM
Should try and get back to what made the first one so popular. ollege jocks dominated. Or you could do a chapter on the first initiation where they were first controlled.
Anonymous
7/16/17, 10:27 AM
Go back to the college and bring back master bieber! Make him a bottom slut
Anonymous
7/16/17, 7:52 AM
First chapter was by far the best. Please go back to campus and develop that story line. The mindless sex was super hot. You could introduce a professor or a policeman, or bring one or two families to visit and have a super orgy. It's best when you develop your existing characters rather than introduce too many new ones without a proper induction (which is lacking in chapters 2 and 3). But please continue. One of the best stories i have read in a long time
Anonymous
7/16/17, 7:22 AM
Write whatever you wish to write, Webb. You can't please everyone. I personally find your stuff very erotic.