Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/16/17, 4:01 PM
First one was written from jock's point of view. That's also what made it so hot. It was very personal and highly descriptive. The later chapters lacked this point of view.
Anonymous
7/16/17, 12:08 PM
wonderful, thank you!
Anonymous
7/16/17, 11:03 AM
Should try and get back to what made the first one so popular. ollege jocks dominated. Or you could do a chapter on the first initiation where they were first controlled.
Anonymous
7/16/17, 10:27 AM
Go back to the college and bring back master bieber! Make him a bottom slut
Anonymous
7/16/17, 7:52 AM
First chapter was by far the best. Please go back to campus and develop that story line. The mindless sex was super hot. You could introduce a professor or a policeman, or bring one or two families to visit and have a super orgy. It's best when you develop your existing characters rather than introduce too many new ones without a proper induction (which is lacking in chapters 2 and 3). But please continue. One of the best stories i have read in a long time
Anonymous
7/16/17, 7:22 AM
Write whatever you wish to write, Webb. You can't please everyone. I personally find your stuff very erotic.
Anonymous
7/16/17, 4:20 AM
I don't know what I just read.
Anonymous
7/16/17, 4:15 AM
The boys on campus were hot. The mindless, clueless sex was incredible. This shit was the parents was a total turnoff. I've had enough unless you go back to the boys in the college. Leave the folks at home alone.
Anonymous
7/16/17, 3:55 AM
More! Very good story (hopefully more older guys being bottoms. Can't get tired of that haha)
Anonymous
7/16/17, 2:03 AM
Loved it just the way it was But was hoping someone let's a y a professor on campus stumbles on this and makes frat his personal harem As for families the can return to normal but frat members remain