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Anonymous
9/3/24, 11:04 PM
I’m so glad you’re posting again!! These stories are so good you really good at creating a slow burn that doesn’t feel slow at all. This was a really hot addition Im loving how you’re making them slowly love these sexual deviations. Watching his body betray him and his mind start to betray him ugh stunning!!

9/11/24, 11:56 PM
@Anonymous Thank you, I try to write what I would want to read. The build up and foreplay is more than half the fun to me. So I want to give it it's due and linger on what's important but skip what doesn't need to be said. I'm happy you're enjoying it and I'm hoping to get the next chapter out before next week but real life has been getting in the way a lot lately.
Jack
9/11/24, 11:52 PM
That was a sudden ending. But I liked it ;)
9/11/24, 11:40 PM
Excited to see where you take this!
9/11/24, 11:28 PM
Hey there! There are a number of strange POV switches between first, second and third that you may want to address before this gets published, especially toward the end of the story.
9/11/24, 10:50 PM
Probably one of the best stories I ever read! I stumbled upon this less than 24 hours ago and I've blew 4 loads on this - absolutely loving this :clap:
9/11/24, 10:47 PM
Sooo hott please break him slowly and completely. More more more
9/11/24, 9:32 PM
Wow, things are really heating up! I'm excited to see the system failure scene. It's rare to see a "true system glich" portrayed in stories, but as always, it's fascinating and brings with it many mysteries waiting to be revealed. And... yes, no system is perfect. Every system has the potential for failure because it's created by humans, and humans make mistakes. It might seem like a paradox until we find a solution. That's why we need fail-safes, and fortunately, they worked. Also glad to see Scott made it. I'm definitely interested in learning more about this glitch. Does it happen regularly, or is it just an isolated incident? (Maybe some bad guys are doing something not good?) And why do the drones seem unaffected? Does it only affect new recruits? Also, what's going on with Scott? Why does he keep cumming without any felling about it? As for the Cum Cap, it does play a crucial role in story, and I'm glad to see such detailed narration. However, was the awakening during the Cum Cap replacement intentional? Does it happen to drones that have completed the procedure? It seems like this part of the program might need improvement, which could introduce some risk. But, from a narrative standpoint, it's an absolutely great perspective. Addition, I think there's a chance that Scott tested his boss based on the colonel's behavior in the story. He must have obtained this information when he turned Scott into an obedient drone. What a naughty Colonel! :smiling_imp::smiling_imp::smiling_imp: Finally, was the last line "obeyactpleasureobeyactpleasureobeyactpleasureobeyactpleasure" expected? I didn't realize what its meaning initially. LOL PS: I can't help but picture this chapter in my mind -- it's so vivid! It really gives me a sense of a montage.
9/11/24, 5:43 AM
Oh fuck

9/11/24, 7:55 PM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) :grin:
9/10/24, 5:15 PM
I did like most of this story -- the scene where dad sees his son dominating the big muscle beast from next door was very hot -- but I've gotta agree with @Ballbustingkid about the ending. If anything it seemed like the message of the ending was that the son's desire for dominance and control in the sexual realm was just because he was confused and it was something for a therapist to cure.

9/11/24, 6:59 PM
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9/10/24, 12:16 PM
Damn, that ending was disappointing, fuck Jonathan

9/11/24, 6:59 PM
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