Recent Comments

Jul 11, 2017
Anonymous
7/11/17, 1:00 PM
Love this transformation!!
Jul 10, 2017
Anonymous
7/11/17, 11:59 AM
OMG write more "straight " stories please
Jul 10, 2017
Anonymous
7/11/17, 11:48 AM
Super hot, thank you
Jul 11, 2017
Anonymous
7/11/17, 11:46 AM
It's in the midst of the New York Men's fashion week...so hot and timely.
AeonFlux
7/11/17, 11:07 AM
Sehr geil........ weiterschreiben bitte
Anonymous
7/11/17, 10:09 AM
Extremely hot. Personally I'm more a fan of keeping it fucked up and taboo, but the progression was satisfying.
Anonymous
7/11/17, 8:33 AM
Great work! Congratulations!
hypnothrill@yahoo.com
7/11/17, 6:39 AM
I totally respect that people might have found this a little too dark and a little too real. As a writer, I debated whether to include the lines about Rashid and Pedro being fired, for example. But I felt like it was the logical extension of the coded white nationalist rhetoric I depicted earlier in the story, so I kept it in. And LongtimeFan, you're right about one of the inspirations for Ryan Paul, but there were two other R. Pauls whose views I had in mind when coming up with the character.
Anonymous
7/11/17, 6:32 AM
i kind of liked this darker tone, but the disturbing evilness was kinda off-putting. I'm okay with people (fictional ones to be specific here) having different ideologies, but I dislike when those ideas turn into action that hurts certain groups. It kind of destroys the immersion a bit by being too real XD
Anonymous
7/11/17, 6:27 AM
Gracias por el Update! Espero subas más pronto! Muy buenas tus historias!