Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/11/17, 10:09 AM
Extremely hot. Personally I'm more a fan of keeping it fucked up and taboo, but the progression was satisfying.
Anonymous
7/11/17, 8:33 AM
Great work! Congratulations!
hypnothrill@yahoo.com
7/11/17, 6:39 AM
I totally respect that people might have found this a little too dark and a little too real. As a writer, I debated whether to include the lines about Rashid and Pedro being fired, for example. But I felt like it was the logical extension of the coded white nationalist rhetoric I depicted earlier in the story, so I kept it in. And LongtimeFan, you're right about one of the inspirations for Ryan Paul, but there were two other R. Pauls whose views I had in mind when coming up with the character.
Anonymous
7/11/17, 6:32 AM
i kind of liked this darker tone, but the disturbing evilness was kinda off-putting. I'm okay with people (fictional ones to be specific here) having different ideologies, but I dislike when those ideas turn into action that hurts certain groups. It kind of destroys the immersion a bit by being too real XD
Anonymous
7/11/17, 6:27 AM
Gracias por el Update! Espero subas más pronto! Muy buenas tus historias!
Anonymous
7/11/17, 4:41 AM
Yes yes yes!
Anonymous
7/11/17, 4:00 AM
What is happening?! This page occasionally disappeare?!
Jul 10, 2017
Anonymous
7/11/17, 3:41 AM
Loved it!
Anonymous
7/11/17, 2:53 AM
Amazing Story!! So Glad that you wrote this and keep this genre going. Like most people here, I don't really connect to the politics, but the power fantasy is what makes the story so compelling. Would love to see you and more great authors keep exploring these ideas!
Anonymous
7/11/17, 2:42 AM
Love where this is going! Can't wait to see where you take the story!