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LongtimeFan
7/10/17, 6:54 PM
Ooh. This is certainly a hot story--I love the gradual mental transformation, and the description of Ryan Paul's workouts (although I'm guessing that the name "Ryan Paul" might be a reference to a specific individual?) :p As you say, this story is politically charged; I myself am a Democrat who dislikes the "us versus them" rhetoric in contemporary politics (and especially from Big Trump). In fact, it reads as an excellent satire of what, in my opinion, seems to be one of the driving forces behind some of Big Trump's supporters: a crisis of masculinity. I am in NO way a psychiatrist or political analyst, but it does seem that the idea of restoring traditionally masculine jobs (mining, coal, etc.) and speaking up for the forgotten people of rural areas (which are often coded as masculine--"city boys" are sissies, and "real men" live in the country) were themes of Big Trump's campaign; add that to the rise of rights and recognition for groups besides cisgendered heterosexual white men, and it's possible to see why the notion of restoring masculinity might resonate with some voters. That's what I like about this story: it takes an issue associated with politics and brings it to a logical (and even scary) extreme. Plus, it addresses smartphone/social media culture in a way that seems frighteningly plausible. In short, it's incredible--not your SEXIEST work, perhaps (though it's still plenty hot!), but definitely one of your most thought-provoking. These are my opinions, such as they are. I'd love to hear from you as the author, Hypnothrill, and from other readers, too. Thank you for your work!
Anonymous
7/10/17, 6:51 PM
Great jobs!! You made it!!
7/10/17, 6:44 PM
Yes by all means get recharged. A writer needs his time to reenergize!
7/10/17, 6:41 PM
Keep going! Make Tim colossal!
Anonymous
7/10/17, 6:10 PM
Great story! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Anonymous
7/10/17, 5:45 PM
super hot man, thank you!
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
7/10/17, 5:03 PM
Pup isn't usually one of my kinks / fetishes... but, damn, very well written. You did a great job showing how the growing pup / sub side was working against him. Tricking him (for lack of a better word... seducing him perhaps) into defeating his own efforts to resist. Just really well done. More.
Anonymous
7/10/17, 3:00 PM
I'm confused. Are they are married but still father and son?
Anonymous
7/10/17, 12:16 PM
very hot, thank you!
Anonymous
7/10/17, 9:59 AM
You did very well. A time-stop story is well worth reading here. If possible, please add more characters to be played with by the protagonist during the time freezing, like the most arrogant ones, cops, coaches, bikers, jocks... really enjoy the time when these hunks have no choice but to be molested! What's more, how about some foot fetish?