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Anonymous
7/10/17, 8:46 AM
I'd add in some more detail with the sex part and descriptions of the guys
Anonymous
7/10/17, 8:20 AM
Hi! The next year there will be a big movie about a black superhero, and I was thinking, would be pretty hot if you write a story about a black superhero being mind fucked by a villain, and gets turned into a stereotypical racial spoof of himself, a mock of his heroic identity, always ready to sexualy serve criminals. Or the hero would be turned into a low criminal stereotype with few memories of his former self, trapped by his own desires, too horny to be a hero again. I think that would be something very erotic, and you would do it perfectly!
Anonymous
7/10/17, 6:42 AM
This story was just plain, well-thought out and expertly written. I can honestly say that I was enthralled and captivated with the writing style as well as the situation in its entirety. Good job to both of the authors for this marvelous written piece.
Anonymous
7/10/17, 6:14 AM
While I understand you had to keep the scenario is short due to the word limit provided. This was excellent, as usual. I enjoyed your first chapter immensely! This one did not disappoint! I don't know whether you plan to continue this? Doesn't seem like it, based on how it ended. I look forward to seeing more of your work!! :D
Taro
7/10/17, 6:08 AM
Can't wait for next chapter :)
ChaoticDjinn
7/10/17, 4:04 AM
As a little side note, i apologize if this seems a little bit condensed to some. it was done as a part of a commission and restricted to a certain word count. That being said, i'm opening up a Patreon very soon and will have some of my origional works popping up on there, ones where i just free write with no limits, so they should be more full and fleshed out feeling. Much of what i write there will eventually find its way here, after a time delay.
Anonymous
7/10/17, 3:34 AM
Interesting.
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
7/10/17, 2:37 AM
Excellent so far. Looking forward to more.
UchihaDEMS
7/10/17, 2:15 AM
If we are going to talk about tastes, as I said in the previous chapter, I would love to see him fool around with an older man rather than his acquaintances. But, as you said, you write what you want to read and thats cool, I respect that. Please, do continue~
7/10/17, 12:48 AM
And to clarify, yes that was what I meant with Eddy and Isaac. Like he was being carried around on Isaacs cock, supported by Isaac holding up Eddy's legs